18 February 2010

Mermaid Haiku



Make-you well mermaid
will keep the doctor away
if you rub her tail.


Lola on the green.
"I love her!" says Mo, but for
Co, well, not so much.

A homeless man naps
just out of frame. Say "cheese", girls.
Now get in the car.



2 comments:

  1. The mermaid hunt is not over, huh?

    I can see the girls growing. :)

    Is there a syllable missing on the "I love her..." line?
    Just trying to recall how the haiku thing works.

    Will be back this week to catch up with the posts I've missed.

    Have a good week!

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  2. Just read some more Haiku on someone else's blog. I think I need to Google it and review. :)

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